That's where you're going wrong....Assignment 6 is THE OUTLINE of your essay...not the actual essay. The outline can be found in the downloadable .doc file that's located in the Assignment 6 page....I'll copy and paste it in a comment when I get on my laptop later...my iPad won't let me copy and paste the outline we're supposed to use into a comment.
Put in your information into it's proper location in the outline making sure you use complete sentences and it's free of spelling and grammar mistakes.
You need to put the essay into outline format based on the outline in the assignment document. Also make sure you use in-text situation and include a reference list at the end on an additional page.
There's most likely nothing wrong with your essay, it's just the assignment calls for it to be in an outline format and NOT an essay format. So if your writing it as an essay that's why you're not getting a passing score on it. It doesn't fit the assignment requirements.
Lesson 7 is the final draft of the essay.